Working for Lito Laeth was going to be a whirlwind.
Elaene Alkalae had woken up to find a hand written note on
her bedside with a list of things that Lito wanted her to do today.
She picked up the parchment to examine it, only to find that
there was a second underneath, with more requests.
Elaene rubbed the sleep out of her eyes. Were there any
requests that violated her mandate of impartiality? She couldn’t tell in this
state. She’d have her bath first, some tea, and read again.
* *
* * *
* * *
As she watched her attendant draw her bath, Elaene
contemplated how silly the chain of service was. The attendant served her in
the small everyday tasks that Elaene was now too busy to do herself. The
attendant also served her family and husband, for all Elaene knew. Elaene
served Aigean, the King in the Deep as one of his priestesses, but her main job
was serving Lito Laeth in whatever she desired—as long as Elaene remained
impartial to the endless political and military squabbles. Lito Laeth, in turn,
served Fiach, the Lady of the Soil, as one of her followers, and assisted the
King Enclosed with the protection of the city and of his person. Altor Caeton
was king, but Elaene knew that he was a follower, and therefore servant, of
Uisce, the Cascade Prince—which meant that he was duty bound to serve the other
people that he was able. And since he was king, he was able, and therefore
obligated, to serve a lot of them.
“I’m surprised that Lito was able to get this to me before I
even woke up,” Elaene said. “I’m used to being the earliest riser.” She remembered
her time in Ard-Abthen, when she would get up every morning before anyone else,
go to the cliffs, and watch the sun rise over the ocean horizon. It was a sight
she would never forget, and she couldn’t wait until her time of service was
done and she could return to Ard-Abthen to teach and to watch the sun rise over
the ocean.
“I think that Lito is still asleep, priestess,” her
attendant said. “She starts to work fairly late in the day, but works up
through the evening. She’s called the Sunset Knight for a reason.”
“I understand,” Elaene said. She smiled thoughtfully. “By
the way, are priestesses allowed on the Wall in the early mornings?”
* *
* * *
* * *
After reading the list, Elaene had decided that she was
obligated to skip half of Lito’s tasks—all the one’s that pertained to
preparing for upcoming war with the Carpenter.
As Lito’s counselor, she was bound to look after her
emotional and spiritual health. She was trained in all of the four devotions,
and could assist someone with their relationship with the gods. As she had
offered the night before, Elaene was also willing to extend this gift to anyone
in Lito’s forces, provided their counselor approved. She was even willing to
perform mundane or simple tasks, just as her attendant was doing for her.
But Elaene was forbidden in taking direct part in the political turmoil. If, gods forbid, the Carpenter was to spring a successful coup, Elaene would dutifully offer her services to the commander of the Carpenter’s forces. She had a mandate to serve the position, nothing more. If the person in that position changed, either through the regular channels or through violence, it wouldn’t matter. She would serve them.
It wasn’t that simple, of course: the elders at Ard-Abthen
preferred to send counselors of the matching gender to their charges. In a
mixed group it didn’t matter that much: the Table in Invercard, her previous assignment,
had both men and women on it. But in a one on one relationship, like serving
Lito, the Elders had sent a woman. If Lito was replaced by a man, Elaene would
only serve until Ard-Abthen picked a man for replacement. This was why her
current position was such a wonder to her: Lito was the first woman commander
of the King Enclosed’s forces in Caeledonia, and because of that, Elaene was
the first counselor in such a role as well.
Elaene mused on this as she was lead, blindfolded, through
the network of stone houses and passageways at Raven’s Run.
After she had gotten herself ready, she had visited the
priest in charge of Lito’s forces in the morning and talked about Wrickon. The
man was glad to have someone else attempt to help Dane, after spending so much
fruitless time himself. He had warned Elaene, often, that talking to him was
going to be difficult. After that, she had picked up a few reams of new
parchment and more ink for Lito, and shopped for some of her own house needs.
Once she was set up, she created the schedule for the soldiers for the next few
weeks. A few of them had decided to stop following their particular gods. Some
had already switched to new ones, but most remained undecided. These switches
meant that certain soldiers were free from past obligations, had taken on new
ones, and the schedule needed to be changed to accommodate that.
Changing one’s devotion wasn’t unheard of or rare. Young
people tended to gravitate towards serving the Crone at the Cliffs, who desired
her followers to amuse themselves constantly. Once the reckless lifestyle began
to take its toll, they switched to one of the other three gods.
This didn’t work for everyone. Some of the lesser deities were reputedly downright jealous about their followers. Dotean, the Master with his Forge, was said to never forgive one who left his service—a grudge which continued all the way until the judgment during the Solemn Vigil. Few people were willing to jeopardize their chance to enter the King in the Deep’s silvery halls, so leaving Dotean’s following was rare indeed.
But Aer wanted all of her followers to make themselves
happy, and presumed that their actions were all done with that singular goal in
mind. If serving a different lesser deity would make her followers happy, she
was said to be willing to allow it.
It was this angle that Elaene was intending to push in her
conversation with Dane. Apparently, his problems with drunkenness stemmed the
most out of a desire to make drinking be a pursuit that worked, instead of treating it as an evil habit to be avoided at
all cost. Elaene suspected that this was mostly due to the mandates of the
Plucky Mother to enjoy one’s life constantly—if drinking was something that
made Dane happy, temporarily, it made sense that he would keep knocking his
head against the same wall.
But for the present, Elaene was introducing herself to the
King Enclosed.
Altor Caeton lived somewhere in the labyrinthine passages
and caverns of Raven’s Run. It was said that the visible structures in the open
were less than a third of the expanse of the place. Untold areas stretched into
the cliffs and mountains on the edge of the Run. If one explored thoroughly
enough, supposedly, she could find a seemingly endless staircase leading up
through the mountains, and find themselves in Ard-Abthen’s famous Cliffcomb,
another elaborate stone-carved network.
Children studying in Ard-Abthen told the same stories, but
no amount of searching on the part of Elaene or any of her friends yielded the
discovery of an endless staircase going down.
The attendants of the King Enclosed continued to prod her
through the Run, guiding her steps so that she wouldn’t stumble or fall. She
had originally guessed that they were getting deeper into the mountains, given
that the temperature of the rooms had cooled, but then the air started to heat
up again—suggesting that they were heading back into the open sun. Now the
rooms were hot or cold, seemingly at random, and Elaene had decided that they
were artificially changing the temperature to deny even that sense to the
visitors of the King Enclosed.
Previous kings had not lived in such secrecy and isolation—but
Altor Caeton was the King Enclosed,
after all. Then again, no one else in recent memory had changed the structure
of the island to the same extend that Altor had.
The attendants stopped her, and removed her blindfold.
Altor Caeton stood before her. He had a thinning beard, and
owlish grey eyes.
She opened her mouth to say something, but he raised his
hand.
“Do not introduce yourself. I do not know you yet. Because
of the nature of your service and the necessity of secrecy, this will be the
only time you see me. You satisfy the conditions.”
Altor turned his back on her, and strode over to his a stone
table. He rummaged through a few things on his desk, and returned with a small
stone object in his hand.
Elaene accepted it from his outstretched hand, and examined
it. The rock was dark and clumsily carved, but its shape was unmistakable.
“A tower?” Elaene wanted to be sure.
“A tower?” Elaene wanted to be sure.
“Yes. The last tower in my Braegan set. I have other pieces
for other Gift Days, but not many.”
Elaene put it in her satchel. “Were you good?”
The King Enclosed laughed softly and shook his head. “I was
terrible. But I wanted to contribute something to the games my family played,
and so, one year, I carved this set for them. I watched them play the game with
the pieces I had made, and it gave me more satisfaction than ever playing the
game myself.”
“Thank you.”
Altor gestured her to be seated on one of the stone chairs.
She did so.
“The formalities having been observed, we can begin.” He
said this softly, but with a tiny hint of humorous grandness.
She grinned, and introduced herself. “My name is Elaene
Alkalae, and I’m the new priestess sent to assist the leader of your guard. I
previously served for the Table in Invercard. They loved me there.”
“I’m sure they did. You haven’t stopped smiling since we
came in here.”
“It’s just… I’m sorry, I don’t mean to be informal; it’s
just so exciting.”
Altor leaned back. He too was smiling now. “I suppose it
would be, wouldn’t it? You will not find it so in a few days, I promise you.
Has Lito been working you hard?”
Elaene explained the tasks that she had been sent on. As she
came to her plans to visit Dane, she realized that perhaps giving such detail
was not that great of an idea after all.
“There is a soldier in Lito’s force that is constantly
drunk, and has problems with discipline?” Altor’s face darkened. “And she has
taken no punitive measures whatsoever?”
“I didn’t say that,” Elaene hastened to say. “I just said
that, um, the priest counseling her guard hasn’t been able to help that much.
But that’s what I’m here for.”
Altor looked at her intently. “That is not what you’re here
for. You are here to help Lito Laeth, not the men below her.”
“This is what she asked, and I have time to do both. Sir.”
Altor leaned back and smiled again, but there was a hint of
ice behind it. “You don’t need to call me ‘sir’, Elaene. You are not
subservient to me.”
“I just meant…” Elaene took a deep breath, considered her
avenues of attack, and continued. “I just meant that, shouldn’t I be trying to help
as many people as possible, if I have time?”
“Yes… and no. Do you know why I was such a poor Braegan
player, Elaene? No, I suppose you wouldn’t. It was because I couldn’t grasp the
idea of a sacrifice. I treated all of
my pieces as equal, and went to great pains to save them all. This was
something my family would exploit, and they would trap me every time. Do you
know how Lito equips her spies?”
“No.”
“With as little information as possible. You might
ask—wouldn’t it be frustrating, to be so in the dark about anything your
commander does? Why, a common soldier might know more than you. And wouldn’t it
be terrible, to not be able to not offer any somewhat useful information to the
Carpenter and his forces? After all, how can Lito expect the Carpenter to
confide in her spies if she gives her spies nothing to bait him with? She does
this because she knows those men are a sacrifice.”
He paused. “The Carpenter tortures Lito's spies terribly. Do you know how?”
Again, Elaene shook her head. This clearly wasn’t going to
be one of those ‘give and take’ conversations.
“The Carpenter likes the stories to get out, for some
reason. He thinks it increases his fear, and therefore his power—he is quite
right about the fear, but it strengthens our people’s resolve against him as
well. He is a fool. One of our spies had seen too much, so the story goes. The
Carpenter tied him to a chair and put a pair of protective goggles on our
friend—you know the kind, I’m sure, being from Invercard. Metal smiths use them
for protection. They cover the eyes with special lenses which cut down on the
glare and the smoke from the forge.”
Altor waved at an attendant for some water, and continued.
“The Carpenter removed these lenses, and instead attached a
curious contraption onto the end of those goggles: a sizeable mesh globe,
filled with burrowing wasps from the farmlands. He then proceeded to apply heat to the globe, by lighting fires on
the outside. The mesh itself did not burn, of course, but the conditions inside
began to get… unpleasant for the insects. The only exit was the goggles—and the
man’s eyes.”
Elaene shuddered.
“The wasps burrowed through the man’s eyes and brain in
order to escape the heat. He did not die quickly. And all this, because the man
had seen too much. His punishments
have an elegance about them; I would not deny him that.”
The attendant had produced the water, and Altor took a
drink.
“But do you know the curious thing? That spy had absolutely no information of value. The Carpenter gained nothing from the torture, except, perhaps, personal satisfaction. Lito is counting on the Carpenter realizing this and stopping these obscene displays. It might work, it might not—we are not certain whether the Carpenter is rational, after all.”
“But do you know the curious thing? That spy had absolutely no information of value. The Carpenter gained nothing from the torture, except, perhaps, personal satisfaction. Lito is counting on the Carpenter realizing this and stopping these obscene displays. It might work, it might not—we are not certain whether the Carpenter is rational, after all.”
“Where are you going with this?” Elaene said, more sharply
than she intended.
“You asked whether you should help everyone. But you seem to
lack how intricate and subtle such ‘help’ might look like. Would it be helpful for Lito to give tidbits of
information to her spies? In the short term, perhaps. It would speed their
entry into the upper ranks, and the like. On the other hand, it would encourage
the Carpenter the spy might know more things after all, and continue his
tortures. So in the long term, no.”
He took another drink.
“Is having a drunkard in the guard helpful for the rest of
them? I doubt it. It brings down morale, encourages a lack of discipline, it is
not good for the group. But what if this drunkard were cured? I will leave
aside the question of whether it’s possible, but I will note that his own
priest seems to think not. You would still need to enact some sort of
punishment—otherwise, what consequences would deter his compatriots from
exhibiting similar behavior in the future? Which is why, if it were up to me, I
would send him to the Drain on the first caravan leaving Caeledonia. This man
should be a sacrifice for the good of
the group. I do find it curious that Lito has such a blind spot when it comes
to the sacrifices she makes for her guard when she is so adept at making them
elsewhere.”
The King Enclosed leaned forward to emphasize his point.
“We all must make sacrifices, Elaene Alkalae. And if people are unwilling to make small sacrifices for their own well-being and happiness… well, we must make those sacrifices for them, and remove them from the populace which they are dragging down.”
“We all must make sacrifices, Elaene Alkalae. And if people are unwilling to make small sacrifices for their own well-being and happiness… well, we must make those sacrifices for them, and remove them from the populace which they are dragging down.”
He motioned for the attendants. They walked forward,
blindfold in hand.
“I trust we now understand one another, Elaene. I am glad to
have had the chance to converse with you.”
The attendants helped her to her feet and had the blindfold
on before she could think of anything to say. They lead her through back
through the network of passages, and when they removed the blindfold she was
standing at the entrance to the Run, looking towards the checkpoint and across
the bridge to Cael Proper.
“Pompous ass,” she muttered, and walked towards the bridge
to talk to Dane.
* *
* * *
* * *
Dane wasn’t in his quarters when she visited the guard
barracks. The other guards said that he was out on an errand, and that he would
be back in a few hours or so. Elaene took the opportunity to tackle the next item
on Lito’s list of tasks.
Raeden Clamore had been a spy for Lito Laeth, and had been
missing for days. When Elaene had first read the task, she had thought for a
few long minutes about whether asking around for clues would violate the
mandate of impartiality. She had reasoned that it would not: she was finding a
missing person, not taking an active role in the political struggle.
But after hearing the King Enclosed talk about the Carpenter’s
methods, she was fairly certain that her mission to find the man would be
unsuccessful.
Lito had detailed where Raeden had lived, at least. Elaene
decided to go there, and to see if there was anything worth finding. Past that,
she wasn’t sure what else she could do—she had a mental image of herself,
dressed in priestess robes, brightly asking for Raeden in all the seedy bars
she could find. Despite herself, she laughed a bit.
No, she needed to be far more subtle than that. She decided to head back to her quarters and change into a nondescript robe before she began her search. Perhaps her attendant would even have some suggestions of where to start asking questions.
No, she needed to be far more subtle than that. She decided to head back to her quarters and change into a nondescript robe before she began her search. Perhaps her attendant would even have some suggestions of where to start asking questions.
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Author’s Note in Comments
Hello, dear readers,
ReplyDeleteWhat’s this? A two chapter day? What a special event, dear readers! And I am well on track with Chapter 6, so I should be able to put that online tomorrow as well. Hopefully with a few more days like this I’ll be able to get the entire novel finished by November as well.
We have now had a point of view chapter from all five of the main characters. One more chapter until the end of Act 1—we have almost finished all the exposition. Get ready for some explosive action coming up. It’s going to be a good time, I hope.
Thanks, as always, for reading,
john
John -
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this chapter! Everything is beginning to come together a lot more clearly. In particular, the paragraph where Elaene reflects upon the chain of service was extremely helpful (and didn't feel dry but rather pretty natural).